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It can\n" + "be sold to shops at\n" + "a low price."); static const u8 sHealthWingDesc[] = _( "An item that raises\n" From c2f278bde30ec288fc96cdc25941129218ddb4a1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LOuroboros Date: Sat, 24 Oct 2020 09:41:19 -0300 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Corrections to various items -Fixed the Honey's sprite thanks to Blackforest -Corrected many items' descriptions (with feedback from the bois at RHH's Discord server) -Added missing items data --- src/data/items.h | 82 ++++++++++++++ src/data/text/item_descriptions.h | 174 +++++++++++++++++------------- 2 files changed, 184 insertions(+), 72 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/data/items.h b/src/data/items.h index 4c5f5c81d2..f2a5767d43 100644 --- a/src/data/items.h +++ b/src/data/items.h @@ -2658,6 +2658,76 @@ const struct Item gItems[] = .secondaryId = 0, }, + [ITEM_CUSTAP_BERRY] = + { + .name = _("Custap Berry"), + .itemId = ITEM_CUSTAP_BERRY, + .price = 20, + .holdEffect = HOLD_EFFECT_NONE, // To Do + .holdEffectParam = TYPE_FAIRY, + .description = sCustapBerryDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_BERRIES, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + + [ITEM_JABOCA_BERRY] = + { + .name = _("Jaboca Berry"), + .itemId = ITEM_JABOCA_BERRY, + .price = 20, + .holdEffect = HOLD_EFFECT_NONE, // To Do + .holdEffectParam = TYPE_FAIRY, + .description = sJabocaBerryDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_BERRIES, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + + [ITEM_ROWAP_BERRY] = + { + .name = _("Rowap Berry"), + .itemId = ITEM_ROWAP_BERRY, + .price = 20, + .holdEffect = HOLD_EFFECT_NONE, // To Do + .holdEffectParam = TYPE_FAIRY, + .description = sRowapBerryDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_BERRIES, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + + [ITEM_KEE_BERRY] = + { + .name = _("Kee Berry"), + .itemId = ITEM_KEE_BERRY, + .price = 20, + .holdEffect = HOLD_EFFECT_NONE, // To Do + .holdEffectParam = TYPE_FAIRY, + .description = sKeeBerryDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_BERRIES, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + + [ITEM_MARANGA_BERRY] = + { + .name = _("Maranga Berry"), + .itemId = ITEM_MARANGA_BERRY, + .price = 20, + .holdEffect = HOLD_EFFECT_NONE, // To Do + .holdEffectParam = TYPE_FAIRY, + .description = sMarangaBerryDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_BERRIES, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + // Hold items [ITEM_BRIGHT_POWDER] = @@ -5589,6 +5659,18 @@ const struct Item gItems[] = .secondaryId = 0, }, + [ITEM_ODD_KEYSTONE] = + { + .name = _("Odd Keystone"), + .itemId = ITEM_ODD_KEYSTONE, + .price = 2100, + .description = sOddKeystoneDesc, + .pocket = POCKET_ITEMS, + .type = 4, + .fieldUseFunc = ItemUseOutOfBattle_CannotUse, + .secondaryId = 0, + }, + [ITEM_ADAMANT_ORB] = { .name = _("Adamant Orb"), diff --git a/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h b/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h index 2392ec52d2..5046dabfc3 100644 --- a/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h +++ b/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h @@ -985,6 +985,31 @@ static const u8 sRoseliBerryDesc[] = _( "weakens a Fairy\n" "move if weak to it."); +static const u8 sCustapBerryDesc[] = _( + "It allows a Pokémon\n" + "in a pinch to move\n" + "first just once."); + +static const u8 sJabocaBerryDesc[] = _( + "If hit by a physical\n" + "move, it will hurt\n" + "the attacker a bit."); + +static const u8 sRowapBerryDesc[] = _( + "If hit by a special\n" + "move, it will hurt\n" + "the attacker a bit."); + +static const u8 sKeeBerryDesc[] = _( + "If hit by a physical\n" + "move, it raises the\n" + "DEFENSE a bit."); + +static const u8 sMarangaBerryDesc[] = _( + "If hit by a special\n" + "move, it raises the\n" + "SP. DEF. a bit."); + // Hold items static const u8 sBrightPowderDesc[] = _( "A hold item that\n" @@ -1986,7 +2011,7 @@ static const u8 sMuscleBandDesc[] = _( static const u8 sWiseGlassesDesc[] = _( "A pair of glasses\n" - "that boosts the power\n" + "that ups the power\n" "of special moves."); static const u8 sExpertBeltDesc[] = _( @@ -1995,7 +2020,7 @@ static const u8 sExpertBeltDesc[] = _( "effective moves."); static const u8 sLightClayDesc[] = _( - "Extends the duration\n" + "Extends the length\n" "of barrier moves\n" "used by the holder."); @@ -2005,9 +2030,9 @@ static const u8 sLifeOrbDesc[] = _( "of some HP per turn."); static const u8 sPowerHerbDesc[] = _( - "Allows the immediate\n" - "use of a move that\n" - "charges first."); + "It allows to immedi-\n" + "ately use a move\n" + "that charges first."); static const u8 sToxicOrbDesc[] = _( "A bizarre orb that\n" @@ -2025,14 +2050,14 @@ static const u8 sQuickPowderDesc[] = _( "powder boosts Speed."); static const u8 sFocusSashDesc[] = _( - "If the holder has\n" - "full HP, it endures\n" - "KO attacks with 1 HP."); + "If the holder is at\n" + "full HP, it can\n" + "prevent fainting."); static const u8 sZoomLensDesc[] = _( "If the holder moves\n" - "after the foe, its\n" - "accuracy is boosted."); + "after the foe, it'll\n" + "boost accuracy."); static const u8 sMetronomeDesc[] = _( "A held item that\n" @@ -2040,9 +2065,9 @@ static const u8 sMetronomeDesc[] = _( "consecutively."); static const u8 sIronBallDesc[] = _( - "Lowers Speed and\n" - "lets Flying-types be\n" - "hit by Ground moves."); + "Cuts Speed and lets\n" + "Flying-types be hit\n" + "by Ground moves."); static const u8 sLaggingTailDesc[] = _( "A held item that\n" @@ -2050,9 +2075,9 @@ static const u8 sLaggingTailDesc[] = _( "move slower."); static const u8 sDestinyKnotDesc[] = _( - "If the holder becomes\n" - "infatuated, the\n" - "foe does too."); + "If the holder falls\n" + "in love, the foe\n" + "does too."); static const u8 sBlackSludgeDesc[] = _( "Gradually restores\n" @@ -2060,22 +2085,22 @@ static const u8 sBlackSludgeDesc[] = _( "Damages others."); static const u8 sIcyRockDesc[] = _( - "Extends the duration\n" + "Extends the length\n" "of the move Hail\n" "used by the holder."); static const u8 sSmoothRockDesc[] = _( - "Extends the duration\n" + "Extends the length\n" "of Sandstorm if\n" "used by the holder."); static const u8 sHeatRockDesc[] = _( - "Extends the duration\n" + "Extends the length\n" "of Sunny Day if\n" "used by the holder."); static const u8 sDampRockDesc[] = _( - "Extends the duration\n" + "Extends the length\n" "of Rain Dance if\n" "used by the holder."); @@ -2109,6 +2134,11 @@ static const u8 sChoiceSpecsDesc[] = _( "allows the use of\n" "only one move."); +static const u8 sOddKeystoneDesc[] = _( + "Voices can be heard\n" + "from this odd stone\n" + "occasionally."); + static const u8 sAdamantOrbDesc[] = _( "Boosts the power of\n" "Dialga's Dragon and\n" @@ -2120,9 +2150,9 @@ static const u8 sLustrousOrbDesc[] = _( "Water-type moves."); static const u8 sGriseousOrbDesc[] = _( - "Boosts the power of\n" - "Giratina's Dragon\n" - "and Ghost-type moves."); + "Powers up Giratina's\n" + "Dragon and Ghost-\n" + "type moves."); static const u8 sGracideaDesc[] = _( "Bouquets made with\n" @@ -2215,83 +2245,83 @@ static const u8 sWaterMemoryDesc[] = _( "Silvally's type."); static const u8 sFlamePlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Fire-type moves."); static const u8 sSplashPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Water-type moves."); static const u8 sZapPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" - "Electric-type moves."); + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of Elec-\n" + "tric-type moves."); static const u8 sMeadowPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Grass-type moves."); static const u8 sIciclePlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Ice-type moves."); static const u8 sFistPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" - "Fighting-type moves."); + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of Fight-\n" + "ing-type moves."); static const u8 sToxicPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Poison-type moves."); static const u8 sEarthPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Ground-type moves."); static const u8 sSkyPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Flying-type moves."); static const u8 sMindPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" - "Psychic-type moves."); + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of Psy\n" + "chic-type moves."); static const u8 sInsectPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Bug-type moves."); static const u8 sStonePlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Rock-type moves."); static const u8 sSpookyPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Ghost-type moves."); static const u8 sDracoPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Dragon-type moves."); static const u8 sDreadPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Dark-type moves."); static const u8 sIronPlateDesc[] = _( - "A stone tablet that\n" - "boosts the power of\n" + "A tablet that ups\n" + "the power of\n" "Steel-type moves."); static const u8 sEvioliteDesc[] = _( @@ -2300,9 +2330,9 @@ static const u8 sEvioliteDesc[] = _( "that can evolve."); static const u8 sFloatStoneDesc[] = _( - "A light stone that\n" - "reduces the weight\n" - "of Pokémon when held."); + "It's so light that\n" + "when held, it halves\n" + "a Pokémon's weight."); static const u8 sRockyHelmetDesc[] = _( "Hurts the foe if\n" @@ -2361,23 +2391,23 @@ static const u8 sWeaknessPolicyDesc[] = _( static const u8 sDouseDriveDesc[] = _( "Changes Genesect's\n" - "Techno Blast so it\n" - "becomes Water type."); + "Techno Blast to\n" + "Water-type."); static const u8 sShockDriveDesc[] = _( "Changes Genesect's\n" - "Techno Blast so it\n" - "becomes Electric type."); + "Techno Blast to\n" + "Electric-type."); static const u8 sBurnDriveDesc[] = _( "Changes Genesect's\n" - "Techno Blast so it\n" - "becomes Fire type."); + "Techno Blast to\n" + "Fire-type."); static const u8 sChillDriveDesc[] = _( "Changes Genesect's\n" - "Techno Blast so it\n" - "becomes Ice type."); + "Techno Blast to\n" + "Ice-type."); static const u8 sFireGemDesc[] = _( "Increases the\n" @@ -2710,9 +2740,9 @@ static const u8 sBeedrilliteDesc[] = _( "Evolve in battle."); static const u8 sMegaBraceletDesc[] = _( - "Allows Pokémon holding\n" - "a Mega Stone to Mega\n" - "Evolve in battle."); + "Enables {PKMN} holding\n" + "their Mega Stone to\n" + "Mega Evolve."); static const u8 sProtectPadsDesc[] = _( "Guard the holder\n" From c2502b0bf59774f21471c41d031019425d3e86a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LOuroboros Date: Sat, 24 Oct 2020 15:44:40 -0300 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Review corrections --- src/data/text/item_descriptions.h | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h b/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h index 5046dabfc3..56cba42963 100644 --- a/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h +++ b/src/data/text/item_descriptions.h @@ -2030,9 +2030,9 @@ static const u8 sLifeOrbDesc[] = _( "of some HP per turn."); static const u8 sPowerHerbDesc[] = _( - "It allows to immedi-\n" - "ately use a move\n" - "that charges first."); + "Allows immediate\n" + "use of a move that\n" + "charges first."); static const u8 sToxicOrbDesc[] = _( "A bizarre orb that\n" @@ -2050,9 +2050,9 @@ static const u8 sQuickPowderDesc[] = _( "powder boosts Speed."); static const u8 sFocusSashDesc[] = _( - "If the holder is at\n" - "full HP, it can\n" - "prevent fainting."); + "If the holder has\n" + "full HP, it endures\n" + "KO hits with 1 HP."); static const u8 sZoomLensDesc[] = _( "If the holder moves\n" @@ -2780,9 +2780,9 @@ static const u8 sAdrenalineOrbDesc[] = _( "but only one time."); static const u8 sHoneyDesc[] = _( - "Sweet honey. It can\n" - "be sold to shops at\n" - "a low price."); + "Sweet honey that\n" + "attracts wild\n" + "Pokémon when used."); static const u8 sHealthWingDesc[] = _( "An item that raises\n"